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Avatar de Sam Aureli

“their tentacles as thin

as the moment between

the beginning and end

of a lightning strike.” a great stanza, Vanessa!

Avatar de Venessa Tai Yeh

thank you, sam! i'm quite proud of that one 🥹

Avatar de Elisa Affanato

Venessa, I remember this beautiful poem from Medium. I smiled when I read it again.

Avatar de Venessa Tai Yeh

thank you, elisa, it touches me deeply that you remembered it 🥺

Avatar de Ken Martin

A poem of shapes and light. So nicely done.

Avatar de Venessa Tai Yeh

thank you for your beautiful comment, ken! 🧡